My Young Authors Challenge Story Young.Authors.Challenge

so this is my story that i wrote for young authors challenge last term so i hope you enjoy it

The Royal Kingdom

Once upon a time in a land far far away there lived a king and the king’s name is john  a queen’s name was tracey  they lived in their   beautiful kingdom and the land was so beautiful and amazing. There were fairies and fairy godmothers and anything beautiful that you could imagine .In the kingdom there were soldiers in the doorway and everything was ongoing and the people of wonderland were all happy because  they had such a wonderful king and queen but there were some people that weren't happy.While all this was happening all the people of wonderland were organizing all the decorations for the king  and queens 2nd anniversary all the people were getting to work and some were even getting some flower arrangements done even that the people were really poor they could do the best they could that was because the john and the divya gave there best to everything for their people so why couldn’t they so they all decided that they were going to do there best but when the john and tacey arrived  they had someone else with them everybody said” yea I wonder who that” is everybody wondered suddenly heard a crying sound and they knew that the princess of wonderland was born there wasn’t only one surprise soon they knew that the john and tracey had twin girls and their names were emma and elsa. Everybody cheered and laughed and celebrated until midnight.

17years later

“hi dad “ said the twins emma and ella “good morning” said john and tracey   emma and ella  sat on the chair while the servants bring the food to the table. After they finished they went there rooms and doing their personal stuff  like art ,reading  or other stuff like the stuff you would do.So while they were working they suddenly heard a someone and when they listened they heard hard breathing sound like someone could not breath suddenly the twins heard a scream  emma said”ella  that sounds like mum”and the twins ran down the enourmis stairs and when they reached the lounge they saw john was lying on the ground and couldnt

breath and everyone tried do there best but unfortunately they could do nothing. But it was good that all the sudden john started getting better and divya asked are you alright yes just a little bit of pain in the lungs no one knew what that was.everyone was so upset after the big shock everybody was wondering .The days passed  and john got sicker every day but one day john got really sick and we called the doctor and the doctor came but sadly he couldn’t do anything so john died and mum was shocked and and tracey  just couldn’t believe it and she lost her memory and doing weird things so she went to mental hospital  and emma and ella were alone .

so they looked after the castle and did all the work that the king does .but some people wanted to rule the castle and have the people of wonderland as servants that’s why one day a person came in the castle with soldiers and kicked ella and emma out of the castle and they ended up in a village and they tiptoed through the village and a cranky old lady shoved ella and emma in the house .they looked and the old lady said i know what happen to you i can help you and trust me and she said you can fight for the castle you have the spirit in you so thats what they did and they fighted for the castle and for many days they didn't eat for days and said there’s no place like home and they won and killed the bad ones and got the castle back from the witch’s .

the end    

By anjli