Last week we went to the zoo and we learnt alot of new facts about all sorts of animals
,like the cabybaras that we never knew about . We got to meet the
elephant anjalee we got to know that she can pick up a car with her trunk.
fact:elephants are the biggest animals in the world . It was so much fun we got to
play around and have an #oresome day !
HI Anjil i liked the way you put in same facts about the animals but you only put facts about the elephant.
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Hi Arnav,
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Ms W
HI Anjil i liked the way you put in same facts about the animals but you only put facts about the elephant.
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Anjli,
ReplyDeleteAre you reading my comments? Your blog posts are way too short. How long do they need to be? 6-10 sentences. Please go back into this post and edit it so it has at least 6 sentences and I expect every other post from now on to be 10 sentences long. If the blog post is too short the reader doesn't really know what you know- we need details!
Ms W
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